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RE: Piano - ProjectG - 12-20-2011 Me_Nakamura is a stud. RE: Piano - Ciphon - 12-20-2011 honestly, i think you have some good ideas, but work on your word choice, as there are some large cliché/outmeal words/phrases that could be better used. I think if you went back and tried to improve the wordchoice, it could be a fairly well written poem. decided to write a quick poem myself [spoiler="yay"] [voice="deep dramatic"] A vast land of infinite possibilities Awaiting the chosen hand to step forward And claim its rightful place in the world. A world in which chaos reigns The weak grow to the strong as The chain of power continues A deathless body that cannot be escaped The adventure endlessly continuing Only the strong, the witty can survive. The gods of the land refined Unite to enforce reason To the senseless hordes of the world (hint hint) Thee who walks upon this land Can never go back As no one leaves… unchanged.[/voice] *heavy metal music plays loudly* ORCWORMS SERVER!!! YEAAAAAA! [/spoiler] |